{"id":15666,"date":"2015-04-20T14:14:11","date_gmt":"2015-04-20T14:14:11","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.musicademy.com\/?p=15666"},"modified":"2019-07-22T12:07:32","modified_gmt":"2019-07-22T12:07:32","slug":"writing-modern-hymns","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.musicademy.com\/blog\/writing-modern-hymns\/","title":{"rendered":"(Re)writing a modern hymn"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>We ran a session at a recent training day called &#8220;Modern hymns: how are they different? How to (re)write one&#8221;.<\/p>\n<p>Here are a few snippets from the session together with some of the new verses composed by our delegates for the hymn &#8220;Breathe on me, breath of God&#8221;.<\/p>\n<h2>4 categories of modern hymn<\/h2>\n<p>Modern hymns tend to fall into one of four categories:<\/p>\n<ol>\n<li>New arrangement such as David Crowder&#8217;s All Creatures of Our God and King<\/li>\n<li>Added chorus such as Chris Tomlin&#8217;s Amazing Grace (My Chains are Gone)<\/li>\n<li>Completely rewritten tune such as Cornerstone (also adds\/changes the chorus) and Stuart Townend&#8217;s It is Well With My Soul<\/li>\n<li>Brand new hymn such as Stuart Townend&#8217;s In Christ Alone<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<h2>How are modern hymns different?<\/h2>\n<p>Congregations often love modern hymns. The hymn-like structure suits the &#8220;older&#8221; clientele who grew up singing Wesley, Watts and Crosby (Fanny Crosby is inexplicably absent from <a href=\"http:\/\/en.wikipedia.org\/wiki\/Category:Christian_hymnwriters\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">Wikipedia&#8217;s list of hymn writers<\/a>). Features of modern hymns include:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>Theological depth<\/li>\n<li>Simpler chords<\/li>\n<li>Added chorus<\/li>\n<li>Bridge or tag<\/li>\n<li>Modern language<\/li>\n<li>Metrical rhythmic structure<\/li>\n<li>Fewer syncopated rhythms<\/li>\n<li>Singable melodies<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<h2>Ideas for re-writing a hymn<\/h2>\n<p>One simple way of refreshing a traditional hymn is to add a chorus. Typically a chorus is shorter than the verses and distills the key theme of the hymn into a few lines.<\/p>\n<p>We worked in small groups with the delegates at our training day to add in a new verse or chorus to the hymn &#8220;Breath on me, breath of God&#8221;. Given that they only had a very short time, the results were most impressive. See below (there&#8217;s one tongue-in-cheek funny version in the list too):<!--more--><\/p>\n<h2>Starting hymn<\/h2>\n<p><strong>Breathe on me, breath of God,<\/strong><br \/>\nFill me with life anew,<br \/>\nThat I may love what Thou dost love,<br \/>\nAnd do what Thou wouldst do.<\/p>\n<p>Breathe on me, breath of God,<br \/>\nUntil my heart is pure,<br \/>\nUntil with Thee I will one will,<br \/>\nTo do and to endure.<\/p>\n<p>Breathe on me, breath of God,<br \/>\nBlend all my soul with Thine,<br \/>\nUntil this earthly part of me<br \/>\nGlows with Thy fire divine.<\/p>\n<p>Breathe on me, breath of God,<br \/>\nSo shall I never die,<br \/>\nBut live with Thee the perfect life<br \/>\nOf Thine eternity.<\/p>\n<p>E.Hatch (1835-1889)<\/p>\n<h2>Suggested additions<\/h2>\n<p><strong>Chorus and additional verse (Jo Durling):<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>O guide my ways<br \/>\nAnd use my hands<br \/>\nBend my will<br \/>\nInto Your plans<\/p>\n<p>Breathe on me, breath of God<br \/>\nThat I may share Your love<br \/>\nSo many voices sing this song<br \/>\nAnd dwell with You above<\/p>\n<p><strong>Additional Verse (anon):<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Breathe on me, breath of God<br \/>\nInstill your Spirit&#8217;s power<br \/>\nThat all I say and seek to do<br \/>\nIs precious to the hour<\/p>\n<p><strong>Additional Verse (anon):<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Breathe on me, breath of God<br \/>\nSo I can serve you more<br \/>\nAnd when I go up for prayer<br \/>\nI&#8217;ll end up on the floor<\/p>\n<p><strong>Additional Verse (anon):<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Breathe on me, breath of God<br \/>\nJourney with me I pray<br \/>\nThrough my life&#8217;s personal joys and trials<br \/>\nAnd dwell in me each day<\/p>\n<p><strong>Rap (Rhoda):<\/strong><br \/>\nBreathe Lord, breathe Lord, breathe on me<br \/>\nPour out Your Spirit<br \/>\nPour out You Love<br \/>\nWe&#8217;ve come to worship<br \/>\nWe&#8217;ve come to praise<br \/>\nBreathe Lord, breathe Lord, breathe on me<\/p>\n<p><strong>Additional Verse (Julie W):<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Breathe on me, breath of God<br \/>\nSo I&#8217;ll give thanks to You<br \/>\nFor all that You have giv&#8217;n to me<br \/>\nAnd all that You still will do<\/p>\n<p><strong>Chorus (anon)<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Then hope shall soar and faith shall grow<br \/>\nThen grace abound and mercy flow<br \/>\nAnd fullness of life shall I know<\/p>\n<p><strong>Chorus and Verse (anon)<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Oh guide my ways<br \/>\nAnd use my heands<br \/>\nBend my will<br \/>\nInto Your plans<\/p>\n<p>Breathe on me, breath of God<br \/>\nThat I may share Your love<br \/>\nSo many voices sing this song<br \/>\nAnd dwell with You above<\/p>\n<p><strong>Chorus (Ian):<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Breathe on me, breathe on me<br \/>\nBreathe on me<br \/>\nMy Lord and King<\/p>\n<p><strong>Additional Verse (John Nash and Phil Chapman):<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Breathe on me, breath of God<br \/>\nJourney with me I pray<br \/>\nThrough my life&#8217;s personal joys and trials<br \/>\nAnd dwell in me each day<\/p>\n<p><strong>Additional Verse (anon):<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Breathe on me, breath of God<br \/>\nStrengthen my fading heart<br \/>\nThat I may go in step with you and<br \/>\nI may do my part<\/p>\n<p><strong>Tag line (John)<\/strong><br \/>\nFor I am yours (slowly)<\/p>\n<p><strong>Additional Verse (Joanna Parsons):<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Breathe on me, breath of God<br \/>\nAnd I will look upon You anew<br \/>\nWith peach and grace for you<br \/>\nIn all eternity<\/p>\n<p><strong>Additional Verse (Chris Seddon):<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Breathe on me, breath of God<br \/>\nThank you that you are always there<br \/>\nTaking each step with me<br \/>\nAnd being in Your Care<\/p>\n<p><strong>Chorus (Chris Seddon)<\/strong><br \/>\nWe want to do what You would do<br \/>\nTo live and endure<br \/>\nTo glow with Your heavenly fire<br \/>\nIn Your eternity<\/p>\n<p><strong>Tag line (anon)<\/strong><br \/>\nTo jars of clay<br \/>\nYou breathed new life<br \/>\nYour treasure kept<\/p>\n<p><strong>Tag\/Chorus\u00a0(Ayo):<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Breathe on me, breath of God<br \/>\nNow my heart is yeild&#8217;d You<br \/>\nI give it all up for You<\/p>\n<p><strong>Additional Verse (Gordon Buss):<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Breathe on me, breath of God<br \/>\nCarry me to the cross<br \/>\nWhere grace and mercy have met in blood<br \/>\nAnd made my pride my loss<\/p>\n<p><strong>Chorus\u00a0(Molayo):<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Breathe on me<br \/>\n&#8216;Cos I need you and<br \/>\nI can&#8217;t live without You<br \/>\nI don&#8217;t know how<\/p>\n<p><strong>Chorus\/Bridge (Tracey Vacher):<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Cleanse me<br \/>\nRevive me<br \/>\nInspire me<br \/>\nIgnite me<\/p>\n<p><strong>Chorus (Tracey Vacher):<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Holy Spirit come and change me<br \/>\nInto the person that You see<\/p>\n<p><strong>Chorus (L Sharp):<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Give me the truth to see<br \/>\nThat You are in my life today<br \/>\nAnd life forever more<\/p>\n<p><strong>Chorus (Clare Ross):<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Less of me, to bring glory to You<br \/>\nGod by glorified<br \/>\nLess of me<br \/>\nJust to bring glory to You<\/p>\n<p><strong>Chorus (Dusty Hoff):<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Breath of God breathe on me<br \/>\nAnd I will never die<br \/>\nWith you I have the perfect life<br \/>\nIn Your eternity<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>Do you have any of your own to add? Please write them in the comments.<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>And if we missed any of those written on Saturday, please do share them here. Very inspirational.<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>&nbsp; We ran a session at a recent training day called &#8220;Modern hymns: how are they different? How to (re)write one&#8221;. 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